Rewrite in a Day
Your Homepage Is Costing You Clients

I've helped dozens of B2B, SaaS, and service-based businesses turn confusing messaging into a clear and compelling homepage — in a single day.

Your Homepage Is Confusing

And you've been talking about revamping it for months.

Everyone on the team agrees the homepage needs work… but no one has the time or expertise to actually take it on.

Visitors land on your site, then leave.

And it's costing you.

No Clarity

Prospects don't understand what you do

No Differentiation

They can't see why you're different

No Confidence

They can't tell whether you're the right choice

The good news?

You can work with me to get a clear, compelling homepage in a single day.

The Solution
Meet the Homepage Rewrite in a Day

Get a homepage that finally makes sense.

In a single, focused day, I'll rewrite your homepage using the StoryBrand Framework and language your customers already understand.

By the end of the day, you'll have clear messaging that tells visitors:

✓ What You Do

Visitors immediately understand your offer

✓ Why You're Different

Your unique value comes through clearly

✓ Why You're the Right Choice

Prospects feel confident moving forward

The Process
How the Homepage Rewrite in a Day Works
1. Prep Work Before Writing Day

You'll answer questions about your business and share any helpful materials, such as customer testimonials or sales notes. I'll review everything ahead of time so writing day is focused.

2. Project Kickoff Call

We'll spend 55 minutes aligning on your audience, offer, and what your homepage needs to communicate.

3. Writing Day

I spend a day rewriting your homepage using the StoryBrand Framework. I'll focus on clarifying your message, removing confusion, and turning your value into clear, compelling homepage copy.

4. Next-Day Walkthrough

I present your homepage live, walk you through the messaging flow, and explain how each section guides visitors toward 'yes.' You'll see what changed, why it changed, and how to implement it.

Pricing
Homepage Rewrite in a Day

A focused, done-for-you sprint to turn a confusing homepage into clear messaging in a single day.

55-Min Kickoff Call

Full Homepage Rewrite

Clear Headlines & CTAs

Proof & Testimonial Guidance

Ready-to-Use Copy Document

Next-Day Live Walkthrough

$997 (paid upfront)

Is This the Right Fit?
Good Fit If...
  • You're an established business with steady revenue
  • Your homepage plays a role in generating leads or sales
  • You know your service is strong, but your messaging isn't
  • You want clarity and strategic direction
Not a Good Fit If...
  • You're still figuring things out or pre-revenue
  • You're bootstrapping on a tight budget
  • You want your homepage to list everything you do
  • You're not ready to focus on one audience or core offer
  • You're looking for "a few nicer words," not strategic clarity
FAQ
Here's What You Need to Know Before You Book
How much will I need to be involved?

Very little. You'll complete a short questionnaire and join a 55-minute kickoff call. After that, I take it from there. On writing day, go about your normal workday — I may reach out with a quick clarification, so keep an eye on email.

When will we have our kickoff call?

After booking, you'll receive a welcome questionnaire with a link to schedule your 55-minute kickoff call. I recommend booking it a few days before your writing day so there's time to review your answers and come prepared.

What if I need revisions or changes?

Once the Homepage Rewrite in a Day is complete, the work is done. The service is designed to give you a polished, ready-to-use homepage in a focused block of time. If you'd like changes to the copy, you can book an optional revision add-on for $250.

What if my homepage needs more than just a rewrite?

This service focuses on your homepage only. For many businesses, that's enough to unlock clarity and momentum. If you decide you want help with additional website pages, we can talk through the next steps after your Homepage Rewrite in a Day is complete.

Your Homepage Rewrite Starts Here

If you're ready for messaging that supports sales, improves conversions, and reflects the real quality of your brand, it begins with one simple step.

Book your VIP Day and get your new homepage copy.

Your investment: $997

Unsure whether this is the right fit, email your questions to melissa@hunsbergergroup.com and I'll help you decide.